User talk:Claudiopinero/sandbox

Peer Review- Mariam Nasrullah
Your article has good organization. You have used many credible sources to add your information. I like how you tied ethical practices and their importance in building a business’s reputation. I also like the introduction of the cost-benefit analysis in your article and how business ethicists are using it to improve the business regulations in developing countries by focusing on basic necessities. You mention someone named Penz in your article. It would be helpful if you gave a little more information about this person to establish their credibility or provide a hyperlink to their wiki page(if they have one). There seems to be some opiniated phrasing like in the reputation building section it says “ they should be transparent and pay attention to their interests”. It would be helpful to change this part to a more neutral tone. There are some grammar mistakes that can be taken care of by proof reading for example in the first line of facilitated development it says: “regulate businesses and he ay they spread.” I am not sure what he ay is supposed to mean. Also “deem the necessary or business survival.” Can be changed to “a necessary tool for business survival”. The phrase “facilitating ethical business development in developing countries.” Can be changed to “facilitating ethical business development in third world countries” to avoid repetition. Words like “lots of” can be changed to something more formal such as “abundance of”. Overall it is a very good article with minor errors that can easily be fixed. Good job!! Mariam Nasrullah (talk) 03:30, 4 April 2019 (UTC)Mariam Nasrullah

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your § additions on reputation & ethics greatly improve the article and show your mastery of the concepts we've been learning...i recommend proofreading for grammar (a few errors), for language (more formal) and for tone (must be neutral, no opinion)  Micalva (talk) 01:25, 17 April 2019 (UTC)