User talk:Clc352/sandbox

I like what you're planning on doing with your article. I like that you are using many different examples of seal genera to expand the article. For example, the Wedell seal and the Ringed seal. I would be interested in learning more about what you plan on writing for your introduction, however. I would also beware of going into too much detail and possibly going off-topic on your article. For example, going into too much detail about the vocalizations of ringed seals when hauling-out.

Overall, I think you've put a lot of thought into your article and I think you have a great start!

Ce1734 (talk) 12:20, 23 October 2017 (UTC)

Clc352 (talk) 18:15, 30 October 2017 (UTC)Responding to Ce1734 peer review: Thank you for your feedback! You're very right about the excessive detail, there's portions of each example I should cut down now to avoid doing so. I did not put much thought into the introduction as I was spending more time focusing on my examples, that's my mistake! I will be redefining the term "hauling-out" in terms of a variety of pinnipeds rather than just harbour seals, as done in the article prior to this project. Also, I will be including the conditions/factors that influence hauling-out behaviour that I will further expand on in the subsections, kind of like a prelude. I appreciate your help!