User talk:Clcoker/sandbox

Peer Review For Leopard Seal Page
Hi! I think your revisions on this page look really great! I think it might be helpful to go through and link some other wikipedia pages within key words of your content. For example, I would recommend highlighting “ventrally” and “dorsally” as many may not know what the means. I think also linking places like “Antarctic” and other terms like “trachea”, “alveoli”, and “surfactant”. Many of these terms may not have wikipedia pages available to link, so maybe giving a brief description (backed up with citations) can be very useful for a reader. Just a small suggestion, but it can really pull your info together! Great work! --Dicalvar (talk) 17:03, 5 June 2018 (UTC)