User talk:Clemonskatalogs/sandbox

Hi Katherine,

I love that you are adding a new section for your chosen article. I also love how you indicated your edits and new additions in bold.

In your new section, you say that Millay "took joy in challenging the status quo". Do you have specific examples of how she challenged the status quo? I can see that you have started writing your new additions, but there are no sources or citations. I don't see any grammatical errors in your new section. It would be a great idea to put a quote from her poem, "My Candle Burns on Both Ends", so readers could see an example. Also, do you know where you would be placing the new section in the actual article? This would be a good thing to add to your sandbox so it can keep you organized and remember where you want to place it once you are finished editing. HHonore22 (talk) 20:50, 23 April 2020 (UTC)HHonore22