User talk:Clockingin

Welcome
Welcome. I understand you're from this class. Unfortunately, I've probably just done something that will likely annoy you (but please don't worry much, if at all about it, because I am writing an email to your instructor right now). I've moved the version of the article you edited to your sandbox: User:Clockingin/sandbox. You can edit it there. My concern with your addition is that you were interpreting primary sources, instead of what WP:RS says we should do. Have you identified any third-party sources written about Czeisler, such as a book or review of his work? It's not really our job (as an encyclopedia) to try and construct a biography of someone's work from primary sources, if other sources haven't already done it. Does that make sense? Sorry about all this. You can reply here, but please ask me questions at my talkpage, or you can always ask anytime at the WP:Teahouse. Best wishes. Biosthmors (talk) 22:39, 12 April 2013 (UTC)