User talk:Clonemoan

The subject "Camera Lens" was not maintained throughout.... Camera bodies, another subject, had been introduced. The introduction of specialty lenses should have been another subject; "Telephoto Lens" There is also a historical element. The word pixels had been introduced to describe the function of the "Camera Lens"..... Do you remember ENG 101 ??? (Clonemoan (talk) 18:32, 28 October 2011 (UTC))


 * I'm not sure what you're trying to do at Camera lens. Maybe you can discuss your problems with it and your intentions at Talk:Camera lens, so we can try to help.  I just reverted your edit that redefined it in terms of polished glass, which is way too narrow, and materials focuses.  What about molded plastic elements?  molded glass?  other materials?  combinations thereof?  And your interpretation of focal lengths is very narrow, tied to 35mm-format cameras, and therefore wrong in general.  Please read up a bit and let's work it out carefully.  Dicklyon (talk) 15:46, 29 October 2011 (UTC)

Hello..... Dicklyon     "CAMERA LENS"  is a rather simple subject. I thought to simplify what was a byte complicated. I am not confident you were conscious of the crowd that explores simple concepts like "Camera lens." I recall my own interests in photography started at 9 years old or so.....       Remember back then ???

When an author writes, he should be rather aware of whom he is writing to. Perhaps I am wrong but, the more simple descriptions are for the more inexperienced readers. Any conceptual development should be cross referenced and let the reader conceptualize about the next simple subject. I won't attempt to redefine what you have written but the complaint banner was rather obvious; "Too complicated"  and "Too much information" etc. were some of the complaints.