User talk:Clubsthais4etern

University of Essex
You will need to back up such bold statements such as "The university is one of the leading institutions in the UK and it is well-known as a world leader in social and political sciences and management." Ranking information is better in the fourth para where it is currently discussed. We try to avoid such POV language otherwise you could put it on every article in the lead sentence, "such and such university is one of the best in the UK". Leading institution is misleading - as I see it is ranked 30-50 in the UK, "world leader" is vague language. If you put some numbers and citation to these then that would be much better. Aloneinthewild (talk) 14:06, 26 August 2017 (UTC)