User talk:Cm3826

Edit to article Pele's hair
Hi, I noticed that you recently made an edit to Pele's hair. In that, you employed words such as "wonderful" and addressed the reader as "you". "Wonderful" is a subjective term, and, in an encyclopedia, the reader is addressed in the third person, like - "can hurt one's skin" instead of "can hurt your skin". Please be careful about these when making edits.

--Spartan - 117 (talk) 11:06, 16 December 2015 (UTC)

Hi.

When you edited Pele's hair you added a whole bunch of references, but only a few of them were mentioned in the text you added. Also there are some pieces of text without a reference. Can you please add mention of which reference supports which sentence or paragraph? I can convert it into the standard footnote format, but I don't want to reread all your references to what came from where! I am not going to give you the wet fish treatment over this. Graeme Bartlett (talk) 11:50, 16 December 2015 (UTC)