User talk:Cmarie51213

April 2014
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advice
And when you do come to rewrite it, write the appropriate contents. We do not usually list executives beyond the CEO. We wrdo not usually list minor philanthropies. List major but not minor awards. Nominations are not awards. List major products and say what they are, but not minor variations. For computer software, we indicate major but not minor revisions. We do not describe in detail routine functions of products. All banks offer much the same services, tho they may promote them by different names & lay great emphasis for advertising purposes on the trivial differences.

Follow our style. For companies we use the full name only once unless there's ambiguity; after that use an abbreviated name of "the firm" or "the company"-- or "it". Write in connected paragraphs, not one sentence paragraphs, as idf they were  bulleted points: WP is not Powerpoint. It is appropriate o include all the firms that have been incorporated, but it is not appropriate to include all firms in which they have invested. Try to source everything to a true 3rd party independent published reliable source, but not blogs or press releases, or material derived from press releases. .  DGG ( talk ) 21:23, 20 April 2014 (UTC)