User talk:Cmasl1/sandbox

I plan on making several changes to the Tau protein page which would allow readers to gain new knowledge on Tau protein and how it relates to Alzheimer's disease, concussions, and CTE. Some information I might add is how Tau protein effects a living cell which can start to lead towards symptoms of Alzheimer's disease. Then i plan on talking about conclusions that have been made about possible medications that have been researched and tested to reduce/cure symptoms of the disease. I'll conclude my edits by saying how concussions can accelerate the pace of oncoming symptoms. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cmasl1 (talk • contribs) 17:37, 6 May 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
1) With his edits I don't believe that there are biased information in the content. It seems very neutral at this point.

2) There are sufficient changes that are going to be done to the article that Cole will eventually change. he would be adding a lot more information to the sections he selected in the article.

3) After reviewing the sources for the article edits it seems like they are right for wikipedia and that it is credible.

4) With the language and tone it is constructed in a way that allows the reader to understand what is being said.

5) With each edit, they al contain a citation the is credible. He will be able to use his citations to help him construct the edits needed for the article.

Peer review 2
1)I believe the editors views are a neutral stance but information provided can persuade to different pinions.

2)There is sufficiant amount of information that will be added by the editor.

3)Each piece of information has a source and but did not to the citation yet.

4)The language and tone is simple and the clarity is perfect.

5)There are enough sources and edits. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ofult1 (talk • contribs) 18:23, 30 April 2018 (UTC) Peer Review Response

I really thought this information was useful and will help me make my final changes. I tried using language that readers would be able to understand which one of them pointed out. I now realize I have to create a citation for the comments even though I have posted the sources. I still plan on making final edits which should be more clear and precise. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cmasl1 (talk • contribs) 18:51, 30 April 2018 (UTC)