User talk:Cmatvc/William Howard Stein

Early Life and Education Section Additions
I will be adding a decent amount of information from the Biographical Memoirs source to the Early Life and Education section, possibly even finishing the contributions to that section from this source over the next few days. I will post on the talk page again when I have finished and intend to move on to another source. --Bayerite (talk) 16:33, 18 March 2021 (UTC)
 * The "Early Life and Education" section is, for the most part, completed. I am going to move on to the organization of a section "Awards, honors,and affiliations" and possibly a section on "Publications." --Bayerite (talk) 20:51, 15 April 2021 (UTC)

Distinguishing between added text and original text from article
I am thinking about adding text from the original article and including it in our draft, that way we can build up and reference information in the original text. Perhaps we could distinguish between what's old and what's new with italics? --Cmatvc (talk) 20:56, 14 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I think that is a good idea! --Bayerite (talk) 00:28, 15 March 2021 (UTC)

Since we're shifting things around from the original article, I think it also may be helpful to distinguish when we're using sources/concepts from the current article but rephrasing them to improve readability. Sentences/concepts from the current article are in italics, and if the sentence needs slight rewording, the reworded part is in bold as well. --Cmatvc (talk) 18:16, 17 March 2021 (UTC)
 * I am going to temporarily add this to the sandbox in a "Notes" section at the top just in case someone forgets to check the talk page. --Bayerite (talk) 16:20, 18 March 2021 (UTC)

Expanding on the short description
I added the lead from the original article so we can work on that. I think it's a little bit short, and should mention something about the Nobel Prize, at the very least. --Cmatvc (talk) 18:47, 17 March 2021 (UTC)