User talk:Cmazmani/sandbox

TA Comments:

In-text citations: yes

Professional tone: yes

Paraphrasing real science: yes

Grammar and spelling: overall good

Links to other wiki articles: yes

Score: 20/20

Peer Review:

The structure and flow of this article make it simple for a reader to follow the information. The references are incorporated to provide the reader additional resources to read. The reader clearly read the sources, understood the material, and formulated it in his or her own words, showing depth of research and understanding.

However, I suggest to change the sentence structure a bit to avoid ambiguous words and pronous, such as "they." Instead of writing the article in the format of an essay, it should be written as an article to be published to a wider audience.

KIROLLOS, MONICA Peer Review: 20/20