User talk:Cmbuff149/sandbox/draft

Peer Review A tad bit hard to understand where the focus of the topic is, maybe add more information about the topic and some definitions to help the reader understand better. There were references, but I didn't know what they were being used for in the text above there were no citation indications at the end of your paragraph add that by using the citation button in the editing process. Therearenogods (talk) 12:40, 1 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review The information you provided was good however it was a little confusing. there were also references at the bottom, but no in text citations so it was hard to follow where you got your information and from what text. Dtross165 (talk) 16:37, 7 November 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review: The contribution is confusing, if the reader has no prior knowledge. Elaborate on LMS, and organize your citations in a better manner. Mjgriffin99 (talk) 03:12, 8 November 2018 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mjgriffin99 (talk • contribs) 03:09, 8 November 2018 (UTC)