User talk:Cmccaid.paul

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A kitten for you!
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Gmenezchahade (talk) 19:44, 29 November 2022 (UTC) 

Peer Review
Hello! I know I'm sending this late (I thought I successfully posted a peer review, but it seems not to have uploaded before I closed my computer) but I'm hoping my commentary is still helpful. I wrote before about the changes that are and are not yet present in the article. I don't know how accurate your article was before but I see the lead hasn't changed, though I see the lead seems to be very good at describing the article and man.

I do have a questioning of the early life section versus the biography section. Why is biography first? why is his birth in his biography, and not early life? I think maybe these headings could be collapsed into one section or some other reordering. I had mentioned in my initial (not uploaded post) that your change in the image (which was a great choice, the previous one felt almost disrespectful for someone to have chosen an unprofessional image) separated the biography box and the image, but it seems you have already seen and fixed this issue as they are now back together.

The changes that are there are great, productive, and easy to understand and approach. I do feel like more content in general would help, but I understand it may be possible that you have exhausted your resources/articles. great job! Nuch1102 (talk) 00:08, 3 December 2022 (UTC)