User talk:Cmccaid.paul/William Pickens

Peer Review
All the edits made on this Wikipedia page are great contributions to the page. The "Early Life" section is great. All the information is cited from a trustworthy source and it is critical to inform readers of William Pickens's background. The more minor edits are also very important. Adding the dates and additional information on how long Pickens worked as an advocate in his organization is important. My main suggestion would be to add information on some of his most important published work. As of right now, his published worked in only mentioned, but there is no information on what they are about and how it was received by the public. Overall, the edits made are very good. Gmenezchahade (talk) 19:44, 29 November 2022 (UTC)