User talk:Cmduvic/Bethany Mota

Peer review Hi Carolyn, While reading your article I was excited because I also did a YouTuber You use a nice neutral voice throughout the article which is great. One thing I noticed was you stated was "She is a role model to people everywhere" I would perhaps change that sentence to keep your article neutral. Some people may not know Bethany or think she's a role model. Lastly, your article is nicely structured and easy to read because of your bold print and paragraph spaces! Nice start, Alyssa