User talk:Cmschroe

Comments on your essay and sources
So far I see minimal if any revisions---did I miss something? Your sources are very problematic. The book by Childs is fine, but the other two are unclear/insufficient. Consider a new article on a narrower topic if you do not have sufficient material to add to the existing article. DH--DHertzGSR (talk) 15:08, 13 November 2018 (UTC)