User talk:Cmschroe/sandbox

Not sure you have enough new material here
Dear Mr Schroeder

From looking at the "compare revisions" page it looks like you have made very minimal additions to an existing article. FN 1 not in proper format FN 2 is not academic source FN 3: did you read in Spanish? Newspaper article not count as academic source FN 4 Not clear how the Lodge book is a relevant source You have 15 points so far and waiting to see how much you have written yourself before moving on to the final 15 points. DH--DHertzGSR (talk) 15:11, 20 November 2018 (UTC)

Work left to do
Dear Mr Schroeder

Problems with your footnotes as noted in my previous message. Typos in the body of the text. Reference to Haitian Revolution unclear. Use of the term "conspirators" is problematic. Need links to other Wikipedia articles. 15 points so far. DH--DHertzGSR (talk) 13:33, 27 November 2018 (UTC)

Still quite a lot of work remaining
Dear Mr Schroeder

I don't see any response to my message of November, and most if not all of the problems remain. If you want help editing, copy and paste your article into a word document, make it a large font and double spaced. I can edit it during your final tomorrow. Deadline is M Dec 17 at midnight. This is definitely not ready to publish. DH--DHertzGSR (talk) 03:53, 14 December 2018 (UTC)

Ready to publish
Good luck in the wikipedian universe. DH--DHertzGSR (talk) 19:33, 18 December 2018 (UTC)