User talk:Cmselecman17/Elodie Ghedin

Not sure if you wanted to make this more concise, but if you do I might suggest rewording it to something like this, "While working at New York University, Elodie Ghedin was awarded a million-dollar grant from the National Institute of Allergy and Infectious Diseases to study Zika virus infections." that's the only thing I can think of to help. --Kcschultz18 (talk) 03:17, 29 February 2020 (UTC)

I would agree with making it more concise and rewording it in a different way. AlisonInggs (talk) 22:45, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for the Comments. I had a hard time trying to make the information to make sense but you did it perfectly. Thanks a lot and I will be editing it with your version (Cmselecman17 (talk) 01:45, 5 March 2020 (UTC))