User talk:Cmtaralom

November 2010
Welcome to Wikipedia. We welcome and appreciate your contributions, but we cannot accept unsourced material or original research, such as this edit of yours to Zeitgeist: the Movie. Wikipedia requires that all material added to articles be accompanied by reliable, verifiable sources explicitly cited in the text in the form of an inline citation, which you can learn to make here. Material lacking such sources, or obtained through personal knowledge or unpublished syntheses of previously published material, is not permitted. Chris Forbes does not mention any of the ideas you added to the article, and by adding that material in that passage without citing a source, the appearance is given that it originated from him, and that he is contradicting himself. There is also no reason to use redundant phrases like "true evidence", since the word "evidence" is sufficient. If you have any other questions about editing, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. Thanks. Nightscream (talk) 05:18, 14 November 2010 (UTC)