User talk:Cmwestfall/sandbox

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Really good paragraph with lots of citations and internal links. I assume this is a new article so there probably should be more info but really good start! Jamesbob2000 (talk) 23:28, 23 October 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review- I think all the information that you added is good, but if I read this section alone, I would think the article is about the Hollywood Blacklist. You could add in introduction paragraph that explain who Fitch is. Other than that, your tone is very neutral and all of your references come from credible sources.

Keehan19 (talk) 22:01, 25 October 2018 (UTC)

The only thing I would change on the article is to have more information in the lead section --Markwoap (talk) 20:58, 28 October 2018 (UTC)