User talk:Cnschroeder99/sandbox/articledraft


 * I like how you took the time to check all of the citations used, and how you took out all of the links that no longer worked or were not correct.
 * I like how you separated the design and properties from the history of the pocket trumpet. Maybe try explaining what the bore size is, and the difference in the bore sizes and how that affects the ability to play the instrument? Also consider the explaining the bell size, and its effect on appearance.
 * I like how you separated the notable players from the history section, but maybe try to find more notable players.
 * Find sources for the famous players that are already listed in the article.
 * Instead of the links to the website, put them into an actual citation.
 * Nice job staying neutral, and nice job with the smaller edits to make the article flow nicer.