User talk:Coachjrb

Value enhancement
Hi, please have a look at Avoid_neologisms. Just being used somewhere isn't enough on its own to merit an entry. Cheers. Hairhorn (talk) 04:10, 11 October 2012 (UTC)

Hi, thanks for the advice. Please help me round this out so you will accept it. This is a very relevent topic in the M&A arena as well as with the Private Equity community. What do I need to provide?


 * Well, for starters the entry does little to explain the term beyond the first sentence. And the content of the entry bears no obvious relationship to the references given, in part because the references are plopped down at the top and bottom of the page. Also note that entries about neologisms need references that discuss the term, not just use it. Your first article might be helpful for you. Cheers. Hairhorn (talk) 14:34, 11 October 2012 (UTC)