User talk:Coco223/sandbox

-Add page title, headings, etc. -Good number of sources; continue to add and build on them -Cite sources correctly; wiki will help with citations if you click on the cite button after the sentence you wish to cite -Look over grammar and punctuation- I think you're missing a few things -Overall good! Some of your ideas can be organized a little better, but I think headings and subtitles will help