User talk:Coconut818

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Peer Review "Women in Conservatism in the United States"
The article’s overall status is very strong. It gives a detailed history of conservative women in the U.S., it is well-written, very well-sourced, and well-organized. The drafts by @Gobears12 and @Coconut818 make valuable contributions to the history and modern developments in the movement. I especially like the details about women in the JBS. My suggestions for improvements are below:


 * Add a section on Nikki Haley under “In 21st-century politics.” Just because she has not run for president yet does not mean she is not a prominent conservative woman on the national stage
 * Expand on what you mean by Amy Coney Barrett “leans more conservative.” In what ways? How have those views been expressed during her time as a judge and now justice? How do her views connect to / build upon those mentioned in the history section?
 * Consider moving the “Trump Era” and new “#MeToo movement” sections to under the “In the 21st century” header rather than under the “history” header. That is where I would expect to find that information.

With the drafted additions, I would say the article is approaching completeness. Some additions should be made (Nikki Haley, for example), but overall it addresses most relevant content. It is well-developed.

Mem0207 (talk) 16:39, 31 March 2023 (UTC)