User talk:Cognitura/Gender inequality in Japan/Tarabien Peer Review

Peer Review
"Compelling topic. Thank you for your organized contribution draft. Everything is relevant to the topic. The characteristics of neutrality are present and in its final stages. Your references are thoughtful and thorough. There are a host of viewpoints, yet I see you approaching them with clarity. Distinction seems to be an item to keep in mind with this article. Perhaps your lead could move toward more conciseness and simplicity at the start. The references to other pages are well done. Your plan of action is evident. Tarabien (talk) 05:41, 17 February 2024 (UTC)"

Thank you for your feedback. I agree, the lead could use some reworking, and my other peer review mentioned more work in the lead. Both good points, and I will make those changes. Cognitura (talk) 04:23, 24 February 2024 (UTC)