User talk:Cole Phinney/sandbox

Peer Review
You have a lot of information with a lot of sources, which is great. All the information is also presented as if I was reading it from an encyclopedia. I noticed in the Early Life section you included his death. I don't know if this is from the original article, but it was a little thing that I noticed. For the Honors and Awards section, I would suggest putting them in chronological order. It was weird jumping back and forth with all of his achievements. Again, it is nothing major, but I feel that reordering the information would help it flow better. Overall, both sections are full of information and I feel like a lot is being added to the article. Cdshel14 (talk) 17:23, 18 March 2018 (UTC)