User talk:Coletteali

Hi Colette, here are some suggestions/questions I had based on some of your contributions to the Kounellis page:

BIOGRAPHY (1) "Early on Kounellis lived in Greece during the Second World War and a civil war that lasted for ten years until he moved to Rome in 1956."- Which civil war was that?

ARTE POVERA (1) "Kounellis participated in the show 'Arte Povera - Im Spazia' at La Bertesca Gallery, Genoa curated by Germano Celant; a show that brought together such artists concerned about the space between art and life, and nature and culture, as Alighiero Boetti, Luciano Fabro, Giulio Paolini, Pino Pascali and Emilio Prini which substantiated the basis of Arte Povera as an art movement." - Consider revising this very long sentence into two more concise ones. Also, I believe the exhibition title is mistaken, it should read Im Spazio, not Im Spazia.

Vsmoon (talk) 22:40, 3 April 2013 (UTC)

Help us improve the Wikipedia Education Program
Hi Coletteali! As a student editor on Wikipedia, you have a lot of valuable experience about what it's like to edit as a part of a classroom assignment. In order to help other students like you enjoy editing while contributing positively to Wikipedia, it's extremely helpful to hear from real student editors about their challenges, successes, and support needs. Please take a few minutes to answer these questions by clicking below. (Note that the responses are posted to a public wiki page.) Thanks!

Delivered on behalf of User:Sage Ross (WMF), 17:09, 10 April 2013 (UTC)