User talk:Coleva3607/sandbox

The only thing that really jumped out at me while I was reading your draft was that you mentioned those of black African descent. I do not know if that is what the study stated, but it seems redundant even though there are Africans that are not black. This was just something that caught my eye while reading your draft. There is a lot of information in your draft, so I wonder if there should be more citations after some of the information that you have provided. The improvements to the article that you have done have began to put bring together the whole picture. This has fleshed out some of the missing information that the article needs. I definitely believe that what I see from your draft has improved the article thus far. Radtkejk (talk) 17:31, 18 November 2019 (UTC)