User talk:Colli3jp/sandbox

My thoughts on the C-Class article about Cleopatra's Needle in New York:' -I thought this article actually had a really good foundation for the following reasons: -It had a comprehensive history of the origins of the needle. - The transportation information seems to be accurate and intuitive. -However, I feel that the piece was a bit more of a narrative written style, than a factual unbiased piece. I believe it is a very unbiased topic, but some uses of the adjectives seems to imply what reader should be thinking about the needle. I also think the information could be slightly more specific. There were several places where the author of this article, such as the location section, where information seemed slightly vague. -I appreciate the more in depth section of the hieroglyphics. If the piece could take on more of that setup, the page would improve greatly.

- Reflecting on the talk page, the only edit I can see is modifying the external links, which I agree with.Colli3jp (talk) 16:43, 5 October 2018 (UTC)