User talk:Coltonschuh/sandbox

Peer Review
Colton,

You have a great amount of facts on your topic, and your sources appear to be reliable. Perhaps you could include more info about the origins of the god Mithras (if possible) - that would be interesting to know more about, and also provide more background for the readers. I would have also been curious to see how everything reads in a paragraph format. Otherwise, good start so far!--Equintella (talk) 04:49, 27 October 2017 (UTC)