User talk:Conchaqueen/sandbox

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Maybe you can start the article with a better lead section to give a better understanding of what the article is about because it's not clearly stated.

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I like how you mentioned specific examples of ecotourism's effects; perhaps flush out the butterfly example in how specifically ecotourism is hurting the species? Also, I think expanding on the paper you mention in the economy portion would be great and also maybe add citations to any relevant topics found elsewhere on Wikipedia. Great job! ACaliforniaA (talk) 16:58, 22 November 2017 (UTC)