User talk:Confession Procession

Your submission at Articles for creation: Draft:Franklin Russell Millin, Jr. (June 11)
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he who am  are  is myself  22:01, 11 June 2014 (UTC)
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Please read the guidelines we give
In the guidelines posted as reasons for declining, it is suggested you go to Referencing for beginners. Your article is completely missing references and includes inline URLs, which are not allowed as they can be mistaken for wikilinks. This shows you exactly what you need to do. It also talks about the necessity of needing a variety of sources instead of a link to google books, and the fact that you should cite the book itself and not a google books URL.

It may not be stated directly but you do want to mention death instead of departure. Ambiguity is not a good trait for an encyclopedia to have.

Hope this helps. he who am  are  is myself  18:13, 11 July 2014 (UTC)

Draft:Franklin Russell Millin, Jr. concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Franklin Russell Millin, Jr., a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:31, 18 January 2015 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Franklin Russell Millin, Jr. has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Franklin Russell Millin, Jr.. Thanks! ~Kvng (talk) 20:50, 10 June 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Franklin Russell Millin, Jr. concern
Hi there, I'm HasteurBot. I just wanted to let you know that Draft:Franklin Russell Millin, Jr., a page you created, has not been edited in 6 months. The Articles for Creation space is not an indefinite storage location for content that is not appropriate for articlespace.

If your submission is not edited soon, it could be nominated for deletion. If you would like to attempt to save it, you will need to improve it.

You may request Userfication of the content if it meets requirements.

If the deletion has already occured, instructions on how you may be able to retrieve it are available at WP:REFUND/G13.

Thank you for your attention. HasteurBot (talk) 01:33, 11 December 2015 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Franklin Russell Millin, Jr.


Hello, Confession Procession. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Franklin Russell Millin".

In accordance with our policy that Articles for Creation is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been nominated for deletion. If you plan on working on it further, or editing it to address the issues raised if it was declined, simply and remove the  or  code.

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing.  The StormCatcher   (talk)   (contribs)  19:17, 16 December 2015 (UTC)