User talk:Connieoh13/sandbox

Hi Connie,

To start off, I really like how you overall presented the subject of agricultural safety and health, I can tell that by the information given, it is focused and to the point. Yet when continuing to write for your topic, I think you should consider synthesizing some of the information and place them into different categories so that it is easier to navigate to the information you may add on. Overall, it is structured much like a Wikipedia article. Keep up the good work!

Hi Connie!

First off, the overall appearance of your article is great! It looks just like a real Wikipedia article. I also like that you've already cited your sources. You've developed some great points that you can further develop into their own sections as your research progresses. Aside from some small grammatical things, you wrote a very well written short draft for your project and I can't wait to see the final!Sarah.hasel (talk) 05:17, 22 February 2018 (UTC)