User talk:Connorbeastmodecmk

Hello, and thank you for visiting this userpage. My name is Connor Kennedy. I have lots of dogs,4 in total. In my spare time I'm usually trying to progress with my art in order to work towards my future goal of becoming a digital designer. If i'm not doing that i'm usually with my girlfriend going on target runs. Then I sometimes chill and play videogames with my friends.

As far as wikipedia goes I haven’t really used it all that much but plan to start using it more for class. While I’m starting to use wikipedia for personal reasons such as shows I enjoy. I will contribute to things I see on the site that I think I might have some knowledge on.

Snohomish highschool
I visited the "Snohomish High School" article on Wikipedia and found three aspects of it worth talking about. First, I want to find out if everything within the text is up-to-date, and second, is there anything left out of this article that should be there? Is there anything here that doesn't need to be there and is irrelevant?

While looking through this article, it's not like anything pops out at me as incorrect. Upon further looking through, I noticed how the Snohomish high school student population was from a count taken back in 2016–2017, saying there were 1689 students. The most recent count is from a 2020–2021 count, saying that there are 1599 students. Other than this, I wasn't able to find anything else that wasn't up-to-date in the article.

When trying to find something I think an article should have, I ask myself what I would want to know if I had just stumbled across this article, and this didn't have a lot of questions I had asked myself. I would want to know how diverse this school was, what the graduate percentage was for seniors, and whether the school's building has made some major improvements since being built. Upon looking, none of these questions of mine were answered.

Looking for more irrelevant things within a piece of writing is a little harder for me because I love knowing every detail, but thinking about it, I did find things that even I would say wouldn't matter if they weren't there. One of these unneeded additions is the school color; if you took that away, it wouldn't matter all that much, as well as their talking about how close they are to another school. Glacier Peak isn't needed all that much. This being a small article, there wasn't too much useless information.

To sum up, when looking at this smaller article about Snohomish High School, there is definitely some room for new things to be added, so it's not so out of date. There are some things I personally would have put into this article that weren't there. All throughout this read, there weren't too many things that I would say were irrelevant. Connorbeastmodecmk (talk) 19:33, 2 May 2023 (UTC)