User talk:Contehrose

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Hello, Contehrose, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Greisy's Peer Review
At first glance, I really like your subheadings and citations you added at the end, they allowed me to see the credibility of your sources. I should probably add those too.

You could add in-text citations so I know what's yours and what isn't, for example, when you defined horizontal oppression or when you added the research which talked about the ways you can combat sexism, I know I also have to do that.

The first two sentences of your second section (Combating Internalized Sexism) sound like they're contradicting each other: first, you say there hasn't been much research and then you go on to say research suggests these effective ways of combating it.

Overall, I really enjoyed how straightforward and neutral the language was, which is especially great for a WIKI article. I also really enjoyed how well each sentence and section flowed together. :)

(Also, I don't know how to find the article you're drafting this for, which didn't allow me to add comments about your content, specifically regarding what's already out there)

Castilga (talk) 22:17, 18 November 2018 (UTC)