User talk:Cooks2/sandbox

Hi Cooks2 it's Nic from class! Just saying hi for the week 1 assignment :)

Seth Smiley's Peer Review
Hello, Cooks2 I just want to give you some pointers and encouragement on the edits that you have made in your sandbox. You are off to a great start with the paragraphs you already have and I'm sure the other five will be great as well. Looking at the article I was able to find a few areas that could use some improving. Specifically, under the header of Interventions, I think that they could use subheading on medication therapies and psychotherapy. Good luck with the rest of your edits Cook2! Seth SmileyGuysmiley3000 (talk) 01:43, 14 February 2018 (UTC)

Donavon Baldwin's Peer Review
Hey Cook2. I would say some direction to look into editing could be in social intervention. Possibly expanding on these steps presented and further explanations on how these interventions could be used in practical application. The strategies sections could use some elaboration, currently it is looks more of indicators rather then strategies for prevention. Direct Talk is one of the biggest aspects in recent years to show as a prevention measure, so you could dive into that and add more insight to that section. Postvention could use more information as well. Something along the lines of the groups available and how suicide in come cases cause loved ones to commit suicide, though group therapies are talked about later, it seems like more could be brought to light at this point in the article. Balddwin (talk) 03:13, 14 February 2018 (UTC)