User talk:Cooleycoml509/Problematic smartphone use

I agree with your peer reviewer - great paragraph to add. There is also a fear now of losing your cell phone as it now holds (as you mention) bank and assorted financial and social information. I did notice that many of the statistics were woefully out of date if you're looking for other areas to work on. For example, the Social section footnote 31 is from 2012.DrTraceyJHayes (talk) 00:19, 28 February 2021 (UTC)

Cooleycoml509- This is a great paragraph! I am wondering where you will place it, though. Were you thinking under the "Psychological Symptoms of Phone Usage"? If so, which section were you thinking of adding it to, or were you going to make a new section? I would also recommend making grammar/spelling improvements in the article. There are some typos and miswritten words.

A few other things I noticed:

Under the "Social" section, there is a misspelling "themeselves."

Under "Social" again, alpha amylase should have a hyphen.

Under "Psychological," non screen should have a hyphen

Under "Neural" there is a typo "than those who use useItalic text..."

Under the "Low Self Esteem" section there is a sentence that could be adjusted "Moreover, online, under the name anonymous, people utilize it in bad ways like the cyberbullyItalic text or spread rumors." SB509Coml (talk) 04:36, 22 February 2021 (UTC)