User talk:Cooleycoml509/sandbox

Cooleycoml509- This is a great paragraph! I am wondering where you will place it, though. Were you thinking under the "Psychological Symptoms of Phone Usage"? If so, which section were you thinking of adding it to, or were you going to make a new section? I would also recommend making grammar/spelling improvements in the article. There are some typos and miswritten words.

A few other things I noticed:

Under the "Social" section, there is a misspelling "themeselves."

Under "Social" again, alpha amylase should have a hyphen.

Under "Psychological," non screen should have a hyphen

Under "Neural" there is a typo "than those who use useItalic text..."

Under the "Low Self Esteem" section there is a sentence that could be adjusted "Moreover, online, under the name anonymous, people utilize it in bad ways like the cyberbullyItalic text or spread rumors."

SB509Coml (talk) 04:37, 22 February 2021 (UTC)