User talk:Cora Christine/CTDNEP1

I liked the layout of your draft, it was concise and well-spoken. The little changes throughout made it easier to read and understand. Especially the shift this article being transferred. I can see how you made it more about CTDNEP 1 and how it works for the signaling. CTDNEP: This has an established heading and a direction. I just wish you added an image or added a bit more to make it more of your own. I do like how it is short and straight to the point. Description: I think("This gene is relatively small and only contains 244 amino acids") should be included once to make your point. I think it looks awkward at the end of the first section. You can include it in both but I think it would drive the point just as well. I also think the heading should be changed to something more focused. Dullard and BNP signaling/Human Dullard I saw the changes that made it more put together. I just wish there was more information or even graphics. The changes are there but I think more can be added about the Human Dullard/ signalling. As well as how inactivating CTDNEP1 can lead to mutations and childhood cancers. Also, I do not see any citations.