User talk:Corchris

North American Bus Industries
Hey there, I see you've reverted my revert of your edit. I failed to leave a meaningful edit summary and also leave a corresponding message here on your talk page. Wanted to let you know that I reverted your good faith edit because I felt its depth was inconsistent with our objectives as an encyclopedia. Namely, you removed some formatting and left the lead summary more detailed than it needed to be. We like to keep our articles concise, particularly the lead section. The full addresses of NABI's operation facilities is a bit unnecessary. In addition, please try to include wikilinks to connect this article with the rest of Wikipedia. Lastly, it may be helpful to review the lead section manual of style. Instead of starting an edit war, I have attempted to improve the lead section and hopefully you will agree with my changes. I've also added maintenance templates to help aid your goals with this article. Please let me know if there's anything else I can do to help. Cheers &mdash; MusikAnimal talk 01:47, 11 May 2013 (UTC)