User talk:CoreyCam1

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Peer Review
The article that was given was very well written, i really like the attention to details and where exactly it was found and when. But i feel like the article could tell a little bit more on why its related to digital art. If you expressed how brazilain painting and digital art are similar then that would be the icing on the cake

Peer Review
The article is unclear and I don't understand where you're going. Instead of saying Female-headed, you could say that the "mother" was left to the household or gave a proper definition of female-headed. Their wasn't much evedince to back up the claims either. CoreyCam1 (talk) 02:25, 17 October 2019 (UTC)

March 2020
Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your contributions. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, please note that there is a Manual of Style that should be followed to maintain a consistent, encyclopedic appearance. Deviating from this style, as you did in Electronic art, disturbs uniformity among articles and may cause readability or accessibility problems. Please take a look at the welcome page to learn more about contributing to this encyclopedia. Thank you. Jessicapierce (talk) 04:21, 15 March 2020 (UTC)