User talk:CoreyCam1/Electronic art/Pamelaelize Peer Review

User talk:CoreyCam1/Electronic art/PamelaElize Peer Review Overall your sentence is a good one, you talked about what your topic was and how it is being used one tip I could give is not to put the citation in-between the word but maybe after the word. But the citation you used was a good one and another tip I can give is to keep going you sentence is a great one. And I'm sure when you add more it will sound even better;Pamelaelize (talk) 17:15, 17 October 2019 (UTC)