User talk:CoreyLester/sandbox

Minor Comments
Corey, Nice job. I think your lead in paragraph is looking strong. Just a couple of comments. 1. Since you mention there are other medication adherence instruments out there -- why is this measure selected? Is it shorter? More reliable? Free? The oldest? 2. It'd be nice if you could talk a bit about the reliability and validity of the measure, but if you do try to stay away from jargon. This can be difficult to do, but its worth addressing. Eva.dugoff (talk) 00:35, 9 March 2016 (UTC)

Hi Corey,

Good start. Just make sure to change your sandbox format for wiki (if you are not sure how to do it, look at the wiki dashboard for Health Outcomes Measurement and click timeline. "editing basics" may be helpful) and keep in mind that sandbox also requires citation.Dhjung87 (talk) 17:39, 1 March 2016 (UTC)

Overview Comments
Corey,

Nice start with your outline. I would encourage you to think about your lead in paragraph as separate from the introduction per se. The key with the lead in paragraph is to define the survey instrument in relationship to the broader field. Why the instrument is worth knowing about and 1 or 2 sentences summarizing your article.

Depending on the amount of information available, you may want to have a separate history section where you can address the development of the survey instrument and who were the developers.

Eva.dugoff (talk) 21:37, 11 February 2016 (UTC) Eva