User talk:Corpulent32

Spider-Man (Miles Morales)
Hi, Corpulent! Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edit to Spider-Man (Miles Morales), as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edit had to be reverted, because Wikipedia cannot accept uncited material. Wikipedia requires that the material in its articles be accompanied by reliable, verifiable (usually secondary) sources explicitly cited in the article text in the form of an inline citation, which you can learn to make here.

Also a few other unrelated points that might improve your additions:
 * Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a periodical, so its content is not worded in a way that references any date of publication. This means that whenever possible, it should be written in a timeless manner, and not a dated one, so words like "recently" are meaningless. A reader doesn't know what you mean by "recently", especially after time passes, and someone reads the article years after you made additions including that word. (Here is an example of someone using the word to refer to something that began in 2005.) This is another reason why it's better to specify books, storylines, years, etc. See WP:DATED for more on this.


 * When adding material to an already well-developed section, like Miles Morales' powers, please try to incorporate your additions into what is already there seamlessly. The venom "webbing", for example is mentioned in the last sentence of the second paragraph of the Powers section, and that is followed by a paragraph on his resistance to injury, and then a paragraph on his costume and webshooters, yet you put the additional material on his venom webbing after that, which is not good composition.


 * Lastly, when writing about the content of fictional narratives, it should written in the present tense, not the past tense. See WP:PLOTPRESENT for more on this.

If you ever have any other questions about editing, or need help regarding the site's policies, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. I hope this helps. Thanks. Nightscream (talk) 14:35, 16 November 2018 (UTC)