User talk:Coryburns/sandbox

I found that the bio of when King was playing in the NHL it was very choppy and did not flow well. I think it would make it much easier to read and allow the paragraphs to flow if there was more depth and information about his teams. The way that they are it seems like a lot of run of sentences. I feel as if Kings person life needs to be added to also.

All facts were cited properly and backed up with reliable sources. All of the information was relevant to the topic, no information was distracting. The citations that I checked all worked, and most were websites that I was familiar with.

(Coryburns (talk) 18:07, 10 March 2017 (UTC))