User talk:Cosmic Pearl/African-American representation in Hollywood

Peer Review
I really liked your contributions! I feel they were very neutral in natural and gave accurate history. The one thing I would improve is the removal of the word "actually" from "different characters without actually having to employ anyone with a darker skin tone". This would improve clarity and provide a more academic, impartial feel to the article. Also, make sure you include the citations that you need where it says they are needed. Other than that you're contributions seem great! Bibliography looks good as well.  Oxtmilk (talk) 01:33, 4 April 2024 (UTC)