User talk:CosmoThorngren

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Your submission at Articles for creation: Brett Thorngren (November 26)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Velella was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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 Velella  Velella Talk 14:14, 26 November 2019 (UTC)

Resubmission of Draft:Brett Thorngren
It looks as though you have tried to resubmit the above Draft for review. For some reason, this hasn't worked and the Draft is not available to be reviewed. Please try again by pressing the "Submit for review" option.

For the record, if I get to be the reviewer, this would fail by a very wide margin. Sources which simply say "Brett Thongren - Assistant Sound Engineer" carry absolutely zero weight. It appears that most if not all the sources are of similar weight.

I also have very grave reservations about the authorship. This looks like an autobiography and Wikipedia strongly deprecates autobiography - please see Wikipedia's position on autobiographies. I would strongly urge you to consider abandoning this project and delete this draft. It is much better to wait until somebody else thinks you are notable and let them write the article. Regards  Velella  Velella Talk 18:34, 15 December 2019 (UTC)