User talk:Couellette215/sandbox

-Good caption along with the photo - add a title to the section you are working on.

good use of internal links, add more citations to show where the information is coming from — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lordakowski (talk • contribs) 14:25, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

First Paragraph -What’s Garand’s first name, consider adding this to the first sentence. -“Hard work” seems a but opinionated in the second sentence. -External link “prototype” and “semiautomatic” if possible and/or not linked already in the original article. -External link “Browning” and “machine guns” if possible. -Change “during” to “in” after “Fort Benning. -Is “03 Springfield” right? Or did you mean “.30?” -“patented by Garand on 12 April 1930” doesn’t need parentheses. -Add at least one more citation for this paragraph.

Second Paragraoh -Add at least one citation to this paragraph. -Especially cite Patton’s quote. -Remove the hyphen after “semi.”

Third Paragraph -External link “operating rod” if possible. -Consider changing the work “smacked” to something a but more formal. -Add citations in this paragraph.

Fourth Paragraoh -External link winter trigger and Korean War if possible. -Add citations for winter trigger. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mpr3300 (talk • contribs) 14:29, 28 November 2018 (UTC)