User talk:CourseAccount2024/Bariatric surgery/Courseaccount333 Peer Review

Peer review feedback for Petersonmk18
Peer review feedback (by CourseAccount333)


 * Overall great job, added excellent content, sources, and enhanced the "readability" of the article
 * All links added (such as the sleeve gastrectomy link, etc.) work well
 * I appreciate the removal of lots of historical facts that may not have been as relevant. Much more to the point and concise now
 * I think its great that the article remains unbiased and factual
 * Great job updating sources to be more recent
 * I like the new section on pregnancy complications you made
 * Suggested edit: Add a citation after every sentence that you added, instead of only at the end of the section

Courseaccount333 (talk) 16:56, 10 November 2023 (UTC)